Your analysis of question two demonstrates a basic understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts. You have made a start with considering similar themes that are evident, but you have only briefly described these points, instead of discussing them in full detail.
1) More your slides around, as your inspirations need to appear first 2) Include images to support the points that you are making on similarities 3) Discuss your points in further detail
This question now demonstrates some proficient understanding of how all three products work together, to make your products successful. This is because you have elaborated and considered a theme between the products.
Your analysis of question two demonstrates a basic understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts. You have made a start with considering similar themes that are evident, but you have only briefly described these points, instead of discussing them in full detail.
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2) Include images to support the points that you are making on similarities
3) Discuss your points in further detail
This question now demonstrates some proficient understanding of how all three products work together, to make your products successful. This is because you have elaborated and considered a theme between the products.
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